Issues Raised After Progress Crit

After the progress crit on wednesday some I had a lot of positive feedback from my peers about my work. This was obviously something that I was pleased with as I was really enjoying the brief so far. There were however some issues raised that I needed to address before the final deadline on the 27th.

These were the issues that had been raised:

• Who was my target audience?
• Some english text was needed to be added to my logo to make it clearer.
• Where is the money going? This was something that I had already addressed my self but it was needed to be explained on my designs.
• Line up? who was going to be playing at the festival?
• Stages and banners need to be mocked up to give the project more context.
• A mock website of the event was needed to be created in Illustrator. The website needed to contain these pages:

1. Home page
2. About page
3. Line up Page
4. Ticket purchasing page